I have to admit to being nervous,due to the issues I had with Grim and the price of what is a very short novella! (bearing in mind that you want ppl to buy your stuff, pricing it sensibly would be a good idea)
However, a lot of the grammar and tense issues that were so prevalent in the first book, were fixed in this short novella.
The author has really created a lovely story and character in Grim.
I really enjoyed it.
Amazon Uk Link: A Grim Holiday (Tornians Book 1.5)